英语写作指导一篇校篮球队长的英文报道

【写作任务】

假如你是学校校报英文版的记者，最近采访了学校篮球队队长苏凯。请你根据下面的采访摘要，写一篇关于苏凯的英文报道。不少于50词。

苏凯

· 喜欢体育运动：篮球、网球(容易)

· 喜欢绿色(令人放松)

· 不喜欢看电视(没趣)

· 房间很整洁，有很多东西

参考词汇：

队长 captain 队team 很多东西 many things

【思路点拨】

该写作任务要求同学们写一篇关于苏凯的英文报道。写作时，首先要内容全面，要包括采访摘要中的所有信息。其次，语言既要简洁、明了，准确地对苏凯进行描述，又要生动、流畅，能引起读者阅读的兴趣。

【学生习作】

Su Kai is captain of our school basketball team. He likes basketball and tennis. He thinks they are easy. He likes the colour green. He thinks it's a relaxing colour. Su Kai doesn't like watching TV. He thinks it's boring. He has a tidy room. He has many things in his room.

【习作点评】

1.习作内容完整，包含了写作任务中的所有内容提示；用词准确，easy，relaxing，boring等形容词清楚地表达了苏凯的喜好。

2.习作语言较为单一，句型多为“He likes ...”或“He thinks ...”。如果语言再灵活一些就更好了。

3.习作的最后一句完全按照采访摘要的顺序来写。如果能调整一下顺序，文章会显得更生动、逻辑性更强。

【习作改进】

Su Kai is captain of our school basketball team. He likes basketball and tennis. They are easy for him. He likes the colour green. He thinks it's a relaxing colour. Su Kai doesn't like watching TV. It's boring. He has many things in his room, but the room is tidy.

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